Abstruse vs Will Burnem

[Abstruse]

Let's do this
Drop as soon as possible
Vote following these cats plz people. If no cats used explain why you thought who won won. Give feed plz.
1. Punches:
2. Flow:
3. Multi's:
4: Wordplay:
5. Nameplay:
6. Personals:
7. Metaphors & Similes:
8. Humour & Enjoyment:
9. Structure & Delivery:
10. Originality:

[Abstruse]

Chigga chigga check

[will burnem]

check

[will burnem]

http://sharebee.com/e5e5a6eb thats mines 38 minutes after check...i thought u was half done

[Abstruse]

This my first audio battle.http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=972340&songID=7912849
LYRICS-
split ya mind in sections leave ya memory scarred
Im squishin this bug like grinding emery bars
Lyrical incisions causing a time lapse
slicin this fuck in half with a rhyme axe
You couldn't be slick if you had an eye patch
Challenge me again you can see who die last
Im raw Ill dump a motha fuckin slug in ya skull
Like reverse engineering a plug in ya soul
Words that flare you up tear you to pieces
Feel the flames engulf only where the beast is
Poking at this scared rabbit welcome to my jungle
Are you aware faggot when I roar you tumble
I rupture his ears like he hear jesus
Speakin in tounges but really its mere demons
What you hear is blessed I sere your flesh
Im so hot my rhymes make you feel possesed
You scared like exorcisms, fear the best..
I don't know what's sadder
that he acts like lil wayne
or act like he a rapper
Scared a' what? I tear you up
Got you chokin like your air was stuck
This is a battle between a bear and duck
but fair enough ill spare this fuck
I spit fluent toxcicities when I grab the wreck
Your music goes no where like old people havin sex
I scorch enemies like striking gat lead
Will couldnt burn em lighting match heads
You try to act hard but you aint thuggin for real
Step on my block and I'm fuckin sluggin ya grill
My words blast like I was pumpin the steel
but will shook like he was huggin a drill

[icy]

ok everybodi goin 2 vote 4 u unkown lol u jus kalled dis niqqa lil wayne
u already knw nobodi lykes da niqqa

i lyke wen u said Poking at this scared rabbit welcome to my jungle
Are you aware faggot when I roar you tumble
I rupture his ears like he hear jesus
Speakin in tounges but really its mere demons


and um u can put a mcdouble on dat

[Abstruse]

1-0 me uppin

[Kryptic]

Bahahaahhahah!
This is so unfair for me to vote..
That fish shout out won me over, HAHA!
I'll break down your drops later for my final vote.
After a quick listen, Abs sounded better with much more punches but i'll come back with a cat vote after I've puffed away.

[Abstruse]

Uppin for votes?

[Dope Antelope]

vote: abs

Flow was off by both of yall, but i think Burnems was too short, he did more talking and whaling than dissing abs.

Abs came OK, against a more punchline orientated battler may have been a different story. Wasnt the strongest of diss tracks but it was enough to win, few goodpunches and decent vocab, less filler than william. a couple decent jabs
vote: abs

[Kryptic]

Sigh@arrogance.
This actually looks like swaying so I'd shh, Abs..

[Chaplain]

I DONT THINK ITS FAIR TO COUNT ICYS VOTE CASUE IT AINT IN THE STRUCTURE YALL AGREED ON!

HERES MY VOTE AND IM BEING AS HONEST AS I HAVE EVER BEEN ON THIS ONE...:

1. Punches: Will burnem
2. Flow: Neither ( WACK)
3. Multi's: ABS
4: Wordplay: ABS
5. Nameplay: NEITHER ( WACK)
6. Personals: NEHIER ( WACK)
7. Metaphors & Similes: ABS ( BARELY)
8. Humour & Enjoyment: BOTH WERE Entertaining 4 sure!
9. Structure & Delivery: NEITHER
10. Originality: ABS

I think abs got this one becasue he actually has some technique...BUT HE WON IT BY A HAIR, I was very disapointed overall becasue i felt like he didnt put alot of effort in this and he could have murked this dude.....

IN ALL HONESTY AFTER HEARING BOTh....I have to give dudes props casue even though I dont liek his style he still came with some GOOD punches and witha little work and more practice dude mught actually evolve a little bit- IF HE develope HIS OWN STYLE....

I wasnt impressed with either really...This battle was a joke...REAL TALK.
Im saying IM LOOKING FOR ROUND TWO Casue in reality outside of ABS lyrical skill it was a tie performance and audio is all about performance...

I say ABs got it but if iw as ABS id call out a rematch to vindicate myself this is pretty embarrassing...lol
( respect to you both though for having the nuts to even psot this stuff...lol)

[Kryptic]

Okay,
Will, Will, Will.
You grasped my attention at the beginning with that "Aaaaaabsstuuuuuuse" thing.
But tbh that was the best part of your verse.
Both of your flows were off & i suggest writing to the beat next time.
You both had okay punches & really whack ones, but Abs pipped Will at the post (Pun, lol) & beat Will.
FLOW IS A MAJOR FACTOR IN AUDIO BATTLES. Get it right friends.
Multi's, Abs won this cat too, try some more internal ones if you can.
Nameplay & wordplay Abs got this too.
Ya'll can see where this is going.

Vote - Abs, but. Chaplains right. A rematch wouldn't go a miss.

& Abs fuck dude, stop swaying!

[will burnem]

abstruse i got somethin to ask you
was you raised by your mom or was your daddy that fag too
mother fucker i will blast you crack you
til you split in half like a mother fuckin cashew
dude wanna battle and im tired of the writin
in the battle ima fight him i aint never liked him
he a ear biter like that dude mike tyson
cuz every verse he hear he go home and write em
abstruse let them shots get past you
ima blast you make the little holes in ya abs lose
you aint the shit no you just ass juice
you aint losin by choice nigga you have to
you should back down throw out the white flag
before i fit ya body in a nice bag
nice day mother fucka say hi
kill you take ya hand make ya ass wave bye

first of all i wrote 16 bars...how its to short i dont know cuz thats what the battle was based upon...the verses was due asap...i fixed a sandwich ate it wrote my verse and recorded it in 38 minutes...his took a day and a half...icys vote shouldnt really matter...how he came harder i have no clue

[Abstruse]

Knockout.

[will burnem]

ha i did 16 u had to use 32

[will burnem]

rematch for real....like really...im scratchin my head on this one like what yall see in this cat cuz i must be blind...dude took a day n a half to write that wack shit and had 32 bars and i had 16 and took 38 minutes including a snack

[Abstruse]

I used 16 bars. 16 bars = 32 lines
you used 8
8bars=16 lines

[will burnem]

in audio 16 bars is 16 lines...a 16 is a verse...a bar is a line....i did a official 16 bars in a song

[Abstruse]

Not true. Lol ask any of these heads kid.

[Dope Antelope]

burnems right.

[Abstruse]

I guess by your standards, to me he's wrong.
And any song that feature heads for a hot 16, it's always long. Like 32 lines.
And everytime I post audio shit it's always going to be 1bar=2 lines.

[will burnem]

nigga how do you make a bar a single bar with two lines.....one line one bar....two lines two bars....a bar is a single line....bars....with a plural....an s at the end means more than one plural....a bar...get this A BAR= 1 LINE...A=1 a bar = 1 line.....get it.....thats a fact

[Abstruse]

Lol closed.

[Dope Antelope]

wow abstruse i can't believe you used to be this stupid LMAO at hot 16s being 32.