BC: Offkey Monkey vs. Millz

[Outword]

Voting must be a full review or will not be counted! This is the third round of the battle competition.

Offkey Monkey vs. Millz

You guys know the rules by now. ;)

[nesta17]

checkin in

[Millz]

mic check

[Outword]

Go, go, go! *Wriggles away*

[Millz]

sorry it's takin so long to drop but i been busy in the booth but i'll definitely drop tonight. 100

[nesta17]

o.k thats cool

i been quite busy too but i got some bars il drop first thatll be over the next couple of days probably

[Millz]

the flames awoke leavin offkey shook as i proceed to clap-the-toast//
i'm hardly a comedian snappin his spine the first time i cracked-a-joke//

last time he dropped a slick bar he was taking showers in prison//
plus i pac 10s that wac you in a sec like college sports divisions//

all rhymerz beware cuz i'mma lyrical nightmare//
i'm a smoker so its nothing to me to light up this square//

u metas are dope my dude but i've seen better punchlines at proms//
and with your rhymez they couldn't help you blow up with time bombs//

we all know you a faggot fuck gays behind now i lay fuckin swine//
beatin me i'll put lipstick on your brain so you can make up yo mind//

u suck u wack so i'll send his skull cap like i brought him a beanie//
and easily have him rubbed out like i'm tryin to summon a genie//

not my best shit kinda rushed it and i'm stressin and shit but its w/e good luck offkey drop the hotness nigga. 100

[nesta17]

lol

dope stuff millz

expect mine tonight

[toxic-flow]

Millz I didnt like nothing in your verse besides "beatin me i'll put lipstick on your brain so you can make up yo mind"

The rest wasnt near impressing I felt like you just keystyled this and didnt think half way through but that one line was pretty tight props to that line but work on your Consistency when it comes to smart whitty lines like that one.

Respect.
Ok now lets see Monkeys...

[Outword]

Agreed; the lipstick verse was clever. :p

[nesta17]

:smh: there could be a blackout in new york id still light up the square
e gangsters get the death penalty when i leave em fried in the chair//
i rhyme tightest so i think you should give it a rest like a sunday
and time crisis is the only time your worthy of the name gun play// (personal)
im offkey like grey mixed with brown, caves mixed with towns
and like defending champions im odds on favorite to win this round//
your presentation may be serious but you still come across like a clown
WTF?? 3 K-O's?? shit masturbation is the only time he's ever knocked something out//
when i elevate you wont be going no where after i break your ankle
desecrate your name like a vandal. this guy couldn't drop word play even if we was playing scrabble //
rhyme nice with the tight skill ..go to arms medieval style when i smite millz
you could be shooting like a nine mill, your shit accuracy wouldn't catch me in line still//
man your low grade.. your bars aint dope, everyone knows them bars don't flow
my flow will leave you road kill on this highway when im rolling like a car on road//
hard on the flow, hold up now millz is back on the scene?? your rapping is weak.
like rastas and green crack and the fiends.. i got you locked on my bars like cats and the cream/

[steven]

Punchlines (Punches):monkey
Personals:monkey
Multiple Syllables (Multies):monkey
Flow: Millz
Wordplay: Monkey ( tough choice but i liked his better)
Creativity:monkey
Consistency:Millz
Overall Enjoyment:monkey

Best drop from monkey i've seen EVER

millz....-_-

u metas are dope my dude but i've seen better punchlines at proms//

^played as fuck


you didnt really have any good punches and personals either.

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monkey

best punchlines i've seen from you. flow and shit too.


honestly, i came to this thread thinking "Millz is gonna take this hands down" because of the battle between him and GTI....but i was supprosed :eek:

[Grave Digger]

Nice Battle {finaly....lol.}

Vote Offkey..

now i'll explain,both came good with the punches wordplay and metaphores,
Millz in your drop you seemed to concentrait on using punches not as lines
but as bars,which in turned cost you in the flow department,it also cost you
in the personals too,as you couldn't build up too them,but i'll say this,it was
a dope drop still,but for me Offkey was more focused in he's outting,he was
more creative with he's punches n meta's just,and in the flow and personals
department too,good battle guys enjoyed the read from both....peace.

[Outword]

Vote: Offkey
Wordplay: Offkey
Punches: Offkey
Personals: Offkey
Flow: Millz
Multis: Offkey

I really thought Millz would take it, but Offkey's bars just killed him here.

[nesta17]

zoop zoop!

if i was honest i knew i was the under dog in this round as well

[toxic-flow]

Vote: Offkey
Wordplay: Offkey
Punches: Offkey
Personals: Offkey
Flow: Millz
Multis: Offkey

Actually I would like to explain my thaughts on this battle.
Yall both been rappen for a long time but..I think both of you could have done alot better. Offkey you had decent content but work on your flow and both of you have to work on consistency and actually give hard gut punches.

just my opinion. We all have areas to better ourselfs in.

[nesta17]

Vote: Offkey
Wordplay: Offkey
Punches: Offkey
Personals: Offkey
Flow: Millz
Multis: Offkey

Actually I would like to explain my thaughts on this battle.
Yall both been rappen for a long time but..I think both of you could have done alot better. Offkey you had decent content but work on your flow and both of you have to work on consistency and actually give hard gut punches.

just my opinion. We all have areas to better ourselfs in.

true that!

all oppinions are welcome and i honestly though millz slacked in this round so who knows what couldve happened if we was both on top of our game

[Millz]

ayo i thought offkey really had a dope drop i know my shit was gonna be straight cuz i rushed it but i don't really have excuses good shit offkey. 100

[T-Rev]

Vote: Offkey
Wordplay: Offkey
Punches: Offkey
Personals: Offkey
Flow: Millz
Multis: Offkey

Actually I would like to explain my thaughts on this battle.
Yall both been rappen for a long time but..I think both of you could have done alot better. Offkey you had decent content but work on your flow and both of you have to work on consistency and actually give hard gut punches.

just my opinion. We all have areas to better ourselfs in.

I couldn't say it any better. I give this one to Monkey. Millz, keep doin' your thing tho, you got some good shit.

[Millz]

I couldn't say it any better. I give this one to Monkey. Millz, keep doin' your thing tho, you got some good shit.

appreciate the luv my nigga. once again mad luv and respect to my nigga offkey and all yall who voted. hopefully next tourny i won't be so busy so i can actually take my time to drop iller barz lol but good shit offkey and good luck nigga

[~LoOsE_LoGiC~]

both ppl need to work on punches... no hate but this aint a whos got better filler battle ya need to punch n millz idk how many times i've seen that make up ya mind line hell i started rappin in 2000 when i was 10 n i used that line (btw it was played then too) no hate tho the verses were some of the better ones on this site.. so both keep doin ya....

[Outword]

Offkey Monkey wins!