My "Swag Epic" (My Song For The Contest)

[mmencke]

Hey there.

Im M. Mencke, a rapper from Denmark. And here is a link to my song: "Swag Epic"

http://www.mediafire.com/?92d5c9yt4m5ausm#1
If there should be a password is it "DJ Lanu5"
If you don't wanna download, just listen, you can do it here:
http://soundcloud.com/mmencke/swag-epic

If you like my song, then follow me on twitter @mmencke
Like me on Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/pages/Magnus-Mencke/136054710246
Like my homie DJ Lanu5 on Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/pages/DJ-Lanu5/247403995291479


Here is the lyrics:

This is my Swag Epic
Don't forget it
I'll give it all
'Till this rap is ready x3

Cash in my pocket, Swag on my mind
If you hating you can suck it, im really kind
In my hood, Is bitches evry where
If you could this shit could be fair
Im winning nigga im winning
Youre sinning, ha, Youre sinning
Im shameless, aint got no shame
This' a mess, im winning like a game
This my future, There is money in this
Easy to cure, taste a bitche's kiss
Its all about the money, about tha Cash Flow
I think its funny, All the things i know
How to make the dollars, how to live my life
Seeing in different collars, like shit in the afterlife

This is my Swag Epic
Don't forget it
I'll give it all
'Till this rap is ready x7

Waking up, newgrowing star
Drinking this cup, Got a deep scar
Deep inside, people hating on me
Damaged my pride, Wanna forget set it free
Feel i have lost my self, my life cant stand in one book
Need a hole bookshelf, all written in my notebook
My swag my style, living my life to fullish
This is my trial, Is my music coolish
Know what, yeah, I lived like this from the start
ha ha, ill tear your fucking game apart
Money, Fame, playing with you
In this fucking game, With Janus, My crew

This is my Swag Epic
Don't forget it
I'll give it all
'Till this rap is ready x7

DJ Lanu5, My fucking great homie
When will he arrive, Calling hes phonie
Asking silent, When will you come
Im not violent, but my anger can overcome
I will keep winning, to the death
Not only the begining, But its the first breath
I can be a star, Know the price
Driving in big cars, Be cold as Ice
You'll here from me, mmencke on twitter
Follow me, this will be a heavy hitter
M. Mencke.

This is my Swag Epic
Don't forget it
I'll give it all
'Till this rap is ready x7
(END OF LYRICS)

Thanks for the support.

-Magnus Mencke
Rapper/Singer

[Mike Lightner]

Thanks for your entry into our November 2011 rap contest.

Your track is being listened to by our panel of judges and the 10 finalists will be announced on December 1st.

Good luck.

[mmencke]

Can i get feedback on my song? So i can be better?