Mixed Tourament - RealShine vs D-Miess

[Inf]

Text battle

5 bars (10 Lines)

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[D-Meiss]

Check

[RealShine]

check good luck and fml

[D-Meiss]

lol look at his pic for bars 3&5


This dick sucking fuck has never spit an ill rhyme so to make it fair fuck it u can steal mine
Cause putting a black light to this bitch lips is the only time that real "shine"

If i was u i would be so pissed at Inf right now set u up for this assult
i mean u gotta start the Tourny -1 which would only be good if u were playing golf

u lame and soft what are u doing here chump go back to school G
i cant belive they got me battling Chunk from the fuckin Goonies

I mean be honest when was the last time you where even near a Hoe
Real like Halie's commet he wont be coming for about 75 years or so

Little bitch still in the mirror waiting for his beard to grow
dude give up on rap and stick to shopping at sears for cloths

[RealShine]

Surprise, D-Meiss spittin wack in each one of his lines
Only time this pussy rise is throwin up a peace sign

And for rhymin? He's like Colbert, he wouldnt bear it
Aint you embarrassed your "Vet" ass almost lost to 14 Karat?
(http://www.facebook.com/group.php?gid=2204419442)
(http://www.jeejuh.com/forum/f112/14-karat-4-1-vs-d-meiss-16-t22617/)
^Votes 2-2

Actin tough cuz you was in army, ha, only a medic
So why'd dont you heal your rhymes? Oh forgot, there not sick
(Occupation
Combat Meidic U.S. Army)

Bullshit if you think your winnin this, im warmin up, scrimidgin
Your two kids gonna work at Taco Bell? Lookin like some immigrants
http://i43.tinypic.com/j5ugxf.jpg

Couldnt come straight with his rhymes if he brushed off the makeup and wig
This dudes history, look, he already put his name in his sig
(It features all older people in history and his name)
http://i44.tinypic.com/mviutl.jpg

[Dope Antelope]

Ooooooooooh shit

[D-Meiss]

Uppin votes

[Dope Antelope]

punch:dmeiss
humor:dmeiss
originality:dmeiss
wordplay: dmeiss
metas n shit: tie
personals: realshine
multies/flow:tie

vote: dmeiss. Realshine u came correct some bars were deep and that can win you shit but dmeiss just came with the humor and punch that u lacked slightly

definitely improved though ur getting better at dissing

---------- Post added at 2:32 PM ---------- Previous post was at 2:31 PM ----------

realshines last bar was quite dope too props

[Magician]

holy shit. real stepped his game up. this was hella close, good battle yall.

1. Punches: tough tough category. both of you had some hard hitters, both had a dud or two. even when i compare them, it's pretty much a tie:
d's 1st, 3rd, and 5th bars were hard-hitting imo, his 4th was decent, and his 2nd was weak. real's 3rd, 4th and 5th were hard-hitting, 2nd was decent, and 1st was weak.
ultimately, i gotta go with real because his worst was better than d's worst.
2. Flow: d-meiss
3. Multi's: d-meiss
4: Wordplay: d-meiss
5. Nameplay: d-meiss
6. Personals: real. i've heard a lot of jokes baout real and his pics, while the shining one came at d with some shit i dont think i've read before.
7. Metaphors & Similes: draw
8. Humour & Enjoyment: real's 4th bar was funny, but d still had this pretty much locked down, as expected.
9. Structure & Delivery: d-meiss
10. Originality: real. d kinda went for a lotta the same shit, real thought outside the box.

this was really close. whatever way this goes, you both did your thing. i'm gonna have to cast my vote for real for edging out the punches and coming with personals that were both hot and original.

[Noxi]

punch:meiss
humor: meiss
originality:real
wordplay: neither did enough
metas: tie
personals: real
multies/flow:tie

close battle,both came decent. both had bars that hit and others that missed. real was evil in the personels-a side i havnt really seen from him, the kids line was wicked as was the last line about history n sigs.

meiss however was a lil more consistent throughout the battle n had better /cleverer punches somy vote has to go to him.

decent battle, respect to both,

vote: meiss

[Dope Antelope]

lmao at P.I

2-1 my nigga

[P.I. The Genius]

good catch lol

[Young Reem]

1. Punches: Real on the slightest of margins. Both came correct, I think real was more creative
2. Flow: D-Meiss, pretty easily, although real had flow in a few bars. Meiss was more consistent throughout
3. Multi's: D-Meiss, also easily won this
4: Wordplay: A few but I wasn't impressed with it. Tie
5. Nameplay: D-Meiss, I think only 1 between the 2
6. Personals: Real, I mean damn, almost on 17's level, but actually good..Lol
7. Metaphors & Similes: Tie...both were pretty decent with mettas
8. Humour & Enjoyment: D-Meiss...But pretty close to a tie, I lol'd at both
9. Structure & Delivery: D for structure, Real for delivery, felt like he stepped up here
10. Originality: Real, came with some quality hits I haven't heard, not that I've heard them all, but I've done some research and I was really kinda mad at his last line because I was thinking of something like that. Well done.
With all that being said, my vote comes down to D's humor versus Real's personals which I thought were the best aspects of the battle. And I gotta go with RealShine for the harder hitters. Good battle.
Vote - RealShine

[D-Meiss]

Lol 2-2 uppin votes

[Inf]

Putting this match up together didnt no what to expect but DAMN!

1. Punches: Tie
2. Flow: Tie
3. Multi's: d-meiss
4: Wordplay: d-meiss
5. Nameplay: d-meiss
6. Personals: Real
7. Metaphors & Similes: Tie
8. Humour & Enjoyment: Real
9. Structure & Delivery: d-meiss
10. Originality: Real

Vote: D-meiss

[RealShine]

3-2 uppin votes

[D-Meiss]

uppin votes

[P.I. The Genius]

D-meiss:

This dick sucking fuck has never spit an ill rhyme so to make it fair fuck it u can steal mine
Cause putting a black light to this bitch lips is the only time that real "shine"

weak punch

If i was u i would be so pissed at Inf right now set u up for this assult
i mean u gotta start the Tourny -1 which would only be good if u were playing golf

that was creative but it didnt sting kinda self glory

u lame and soft what are u doing here chump go back to school G
i cant belive they got me battling Chunk from the fuckin Goonies

hahah funny shit but I think it would be better on audio

I mean be honest when was the last time you where even near a Hoe
Real like Halie's commet he wont be coming for about 75 years or so

now thats creative as shit but I just dont like the wording

Little bitch still in the mirror waiting for his beard to grow
dude give up on rap and stick to shopping at sears for cloths

funny not too creative but the 2 bar rhyme scheme where you continued off the last bar is ill


realshine:

Surprise, D-Meiss spittin wack in each one of his lines
Only time this pussy rise is throwin up a peace sign

no punch

And for rhymin? He's like Colbert, he wouldnt bear it
Aint you embarrassed your "Vet" ass almost lost to 14 Karat?
(http://www.facebook.com/group.php?gid=2204419442)
(http://www.jeejuh.com/forum/f112/14-...iss-16-t22617/)
^Votes 2-2

not bad but its not a punch

Actin tough cuz you was in army, ha, only a medic
So why'd dont you heal your rhymes? Oh forgot, there not sick
(Occupation
Combat Meidic U.S. Army)

not bad but you shoulda made it a creative punch not just say it

Bullshit if you think your winnin this, im warmin up, scrimidgin
Your two kids gonna work at Taco Bell? Lookin like some immigrants

best line of the battle here still not a punch but at least you came humorous


categories :

punches : D-meisss
flow : D-meiss
multies : D-meiss
personals : realshine
metas and similies : D-meiss
wordplay : none
nameplay : D-meiss
structure and delivery : D-meiss
humor and enjoyment : edge goes to realshine
originality : tie

vote : D-meiss, this was closer then the cats make it look but thats reals fault see real no matter how good your work is you can't just ignore the categories this is all I have to judge it by I think D-meiss wins because of categories and because he had more creative lines and real just really had like 1 good bar and the rest was mediocre good battle though.

[Dope Antelope]

dumbass forgot reals last bar :laugh:

[D-Meiss]

4-2 uppin

[Not-N-Nice]

DMeiss...WINS!!!

real only had 2 decent bars (we all know which)
while D kept a aiight momentum throughout and more hard hittas!!

Good Battle tho

[hbxiaoqiang]

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