Come along Mr. OffKey

[Hajime]

This is how it goes down Offkey Monkey: Unlimited bars, all out war, now I may not write down as many as you because I have college classes to look after, but don't underestimate.

The only rules: no whack verses, and they must be creative

From my Gatling gun I fire the first hundred rounds/
blasting holes in u bigger than interstate 8
Faster than Arnold can scream "get dowwn!/
U think u can escape, look above thunder and rain
my blows come upon u with depth deeper than Novocaine/
Looks like the primate is on trial
Dis is grown folks business
sit back with a banana, coke n a smile
My objective is to weed out the weak mc's
bury you in the core of the earth, you'll roast hellishly
Maybe they ought to volunteer u for animal testing
Torture you day n night screaming bloody murder without resting
Flail your miserable carcass alive, use it for fish bait
Lastly your body is placed in a tanner shop, the finality of your fate

[-wizeguy-]

haha! sick concepts in there!

im a drop tonight

[-wizeguy-]

man im the ameture killer.. eye view like the eagle
and like characters for filler.. you'll never see the sequel ..
hajime.. this is just the "beginning" of the end
i wrote these bars whisking my head so im mixing your blend//
you cant keep on topic..your mind drifts like some GTO hitting a bend
this little fassy cant attack me! theres a queer in here! i bet you been rimming your friends//
hajime wrote a little 9 that hardly even rhymed.. i construct scrolls
call me shang tsung, i store my victims in the valley of the lost souls//
and now your doomed..hajime's conscience mind is under my command
chop you down like lumberjack, coz im a danger like thunder in japan//
big slick quick punches like e.Honda.., too big for you call me yokozuna
il rap you up like an anaconda, coz im hard like i caught a glimpse of Medusa//
spiritually and lyrically.. my rhyme-is on the highest sub-plane like my font was lavender
harder to get to than the "lost jungle" in the 'darkest parts of africa'//

* lost jungle was the first film and the sequel was darkest africa
fyi
this was loosely done.. not really hurting you just dropping like you did
trying to bring some different concepts to this

[Hajime]

Monkey misunderstands, arrogant in need of a reprimand/
My style is legendary Like Haikara's "get glory in his hand"/
I like to be abstract, freedom while others r under stringent contracts/
'cause you always hold to yo' method, prob'ly rot like cataracts/
"armature killer" more like circus freak-a, mistakened for a senorita/
We got a bleeder! hacked and slashed worse than Hiroshima/
Please, you claim I'm under your control, dig ur self a deeper hole/
Like the greatest poker player, I play for keeps never fold/
U facing me is like facing Mother earth in half sleep/
even in my dream state, your efforts r powerless against me/
But when I woke up, Hell was tossed up, and earth met the hevenlies/

=Haikara is Japanese Rock band of prestigious reputation, one of their hit songs and singles was Style - "Get Glory In His Hand"

[T-Rev]

Both of you came out with sick lines. Also you guys used different styles than I've seen you use before, which is pretty cool.

Just comparin' the first verses: Hajime had some good shit with his concepts and pretty good punchlines. But Offkey had all of that with more multi-rhymes, so I'm gonna' have to give the first verse to Monkey.

Still, both of you came hella' hard right there.

[Outword]

Both for good yes, but Offkey had more original lines.

My vote goes to Offkey.

[Grave Digger]

yeah offkey got this he was more creative than Hajime,and i'll explain
why,Hajime you had decent contents in both drops,although your 2nd
verse was the better out the 2,your verses were on the hit and miss
side of things,in some parts your lines worked,but in others parts
they fell off,you didn't really have any consistancy...anyways peace..

[Millz]

Originally Posted by Grave Digger

yeah offkey got this he was more creative than Hajime,and i'll explain
why,Hajime you had decent contents in both drops,although your 2nd
verse was the better out the 2,your verses were on the hit and miss
side of things,in some parts your lines worked,but in others parts
they fell off,you didn't really have any consistancy...anyways peace..

^^^^ no hate but i pretty much agree with grave digger. hajime dude u sick as fuck and i know you could have came harder. if you would have gotten more personal and had more punches or anything with comedic value this would have been your's easily. so i'm givin it to the homie offkey on this one. he had a lot of witty lines in his shit. hajime had some witty lines but they didn't come back to back ya dig. i must say i really like hajime's style of rhyme it is different just add more hard hitting punchlines my nig and you'll start trashin dudes. 100

[Hajime]

thanks guys, yeah I admit it OffKey had the better rhymes. I will tell this, its hard to write rhymes when your mind is already taxed by work and school. Try that on for size. Pleasure battling with you OffKey.