Dragged (audio)

[phILLy bONE]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...songID=7919322

Am I sane, insane or just strange,
answer revolves around my veins
This is no game, I remained grounded
chains around my inflamed ankles
Aimed sights strangle the famed nights
, range to ignite blood stained fights
exchange angles with kites
Change my stripes from a Bengal’s
to a Zebra’s mane to mangle
Dangled my chain in front of her face
, black windows tinted stained full
Of jet black color case,
no others in tact in order
to resolve the brothers attacks
Get back, I didn’t forget, in fact ,
I’ll always remember your red corvette
Outlining the street lights, a silhouette,
burning tar, full of deceit like a cigarette
Never regret, never rewind the cassettes,
no less notice my focus, that I never left and fled
Even if you were upset, in debt, or fed up,
I would try my best, no less, never enough

I brought a toothpick to a gunfight,
call me stupid but I’m ruthless since I’ve begun life
It’s fun right? Pull in, jump out the van,
your grabbed and stabbed in pure day light
I can’t cure your aids on sight,
but let me take you out back and make you afraid of dikes
Snatch you up, and break your hands,
it’s a rap, piece of crap, take a stance
Get some guts, or I’ll put them out,
showing you no love, I will whisper never shout
Always clever about my lines,
never whether or not I’m out or inside the margins
Turn nickels into dimes,
barge in a bank with a pair of nines so my cards all in
Always stayin ballin, callin my shots,
never worry about catching one cold on the block
Bold looks, stress has you paranoid,
charges dropped but still looking out for a clip to fall
I told you not to flock to the streets when they called,
left motionless, one dead in the stall

[Kryptic]

Yoooooooo.
Lyrics, are cool man.
But homie.. Flow, is really bad dude.
Skype it soon, the beat seems a little hard to write to.. But, it kind of sounds like you wrote your lyrics & then found a beat & spat over it.
You need to write your lyrics to the beat yo.
This flow is worse than the shook ones & Chap song.
I'm not sure what I can suggest apart from what I already have?
Idk, you'll get there dude.

[phILLy bONE]

Straight up on this I did it to a different beat but I couldn't find a download, so I just threw another one that I already had, if ya check my other thread I think my flows gettn better...I recognized this as awful haha.