T-Rev vs. Bartone -Poll

[T-Rev]

Bartone's back to get twisted,
he persisted and insisted so I finally enlisted,
after I'm finished he won't have seemed to have resisted,
forget resistance, you won't even know he existed,

I'll have him falling tight-fisted, completely unassisted,
knocked out if he listens, to what my rhymes have consisted,
even clean christians can't live up to my missions,
I bring pain and joy, either way your tears glisten,

The way I see it, it's a murder mystery,
even considered fictional because it's so history,
but I know you were there because your breath's blistering,
by your corpse I left a dollar, go get yourself some listering ////

[T-Rev]

This one's Bartone's verse.....

Your attempt at multiple sylabols, was utterly pitiful //
"resisted", "resistance", "existed" , your obviously still in school //
When you turn in the sand its scary, but Im not concerned with my advesaries //
I bet the pope wold start burning a sanctuary before you learn some vocabulary //

I should tear away your flesh with a bayonet cuz nothing you say is fresh //
You'll get laid to rest in bangladesh, I got a demons wings but an angels vest//
I'll have my man pass you base then seran wrap ur face //
Drive a van past your place with gats at my waiste while your dads at the gate //

I swear on the holy bible, this situations more then vital //
But don't feel bad Im your golden idol...I'm just homicidal will all my rivals //
You can catch me in a trench, but your just a seasonal vet//
You went from "XXX" to a "Pacifire", we'll call it the Vin Diesel effect //

[nesta17]

Bartone's back to get twisted,
he persisted and insisted so I finally enlisted,
after I'm finished he won't have seemed to have resisted,
forget resistance, you won't even know he existed,

I'll have him falling tight-fisted, completely unassisted,
knocked out if he listens, to what my rhymes have consisted,
even clean christians can't live up to my missions,
I bring pain and joy, either way your tears glisten,

The way I see it, it's a murder mystery,
even considered fictional because it's so history,
but I know you were there because your breath's blistering,
by your corpse I left a dollar, go get yourself some listering ////

^^ good vocab + flow!
the christians and missions line was pretty smart even if it we'rnt directed at bartone. i aint going to lie you lacked punches which mabey would've given you an edge over him, felt mabey if your verse had one or two major impact punchlines the outcome would've been different and we wouldve had an upset on our hands.. maybe? who knows. either way i enjoyed reading this still.

even considered fictional because it's so history,

this line baffled me, are you referring to certain tales from the past that are thought of as myths? ( maybe im reading too much into this )

Your attempt at multiple sylabols, was utterly pitiful //
"resisted", "resistance", "existed" , your obviously still in school //
When you turn in the sand its scary, but Im not concerned with my advesaries //
I bet the pope wold start burning a sanctuary before you learn some vocabulary //

I should tear away your flesh with a bayonet cuz nothing you say is fresh //
You'll get laid to rest in bangladesh, I got a demons wings but an angels vest//
I'll have my man pass you base then seran wrap ur face //
Drive a van past your place with gats at my waiste while your dads at the gate //

I swear on the holy bible, this situations more then vital //
But don't feel bad Im your golden idol...I'm just homicidal will all my rivals //
You can catch me in a trench, but your just a seasonal vet//
You went from "XXX" to a "Pacifire", we'll call it the Vin Diesel effect //

i dont expect to see anything but dope bars from bartone (no homo), the fourth line in on the first set of bars is what we see best from him.. flow with a sting at the end.
your second set i feel was more play than punching t-rev but with that said my votes gotta go to bartone for overall consistency and fly punches.

[T-Rev]

^^^It's all good. Thanks for the vote bro.

[Grave Digger]

punches, Bartone
personals, hmm,Bartone
flow,T-Rev
meta's/wordplay, Bartone
consistency, Tie
enjoyment, Tie

Vote Bartone and here's why,he's verse was more focused and that
little bit more creative in the punch department,plus coupled with he's
wordplay/meta's,it just hit harder,but in saying that,i agree with the
Offkey man,a couple of half decent punches and this vote would be
going in the other direction....peace.

[T-Rev]

^^^ I'll just have to step it up next time I guess, thanks for voting.