1. Whitewidower vs Dope Antelope [ Group B ] group stage-TOURNY

[Huzzle]

The edited table
GROUP A
1. phILLy bONE
6. DamageC
9. DFamous
12. Dice

GROUP B
2. Whitewidower
8. Dope Antelope
3. Thermo
4. Dmeiss


GROUP C
15. Freshrythm
7. CANS.ER.US
13. Jittery Zeitgeist
5. Unknown760

GROUP D
14. Kris burn
11. The Myth
10. Icy
16. Forensyx

GROUP A
1. phILLy bONE vs DamageC
2. phILLy bONE vs DFamous
3 phILLy bONE vs Dice
4 DamageC vs DFamous
5. DFamous vs Dice
6. DamageC vs Dice

GROUP B
1. Whitewidower vs Dope Antelope
2. Whitewidower vs Thermo
3. Whitewidower vs Dmeiss
4. Dope Antelope vs Thermo
5. Dope Antelope vs Dmeiss
6. Thermo vs Dmeiss

GROUP C
1. Freshrythm vs CANS.ER.US
2. Freshrythm vs Jittery Zeitgeist
3. Freshrythm vs Unknown760
4. CANS.ER.US vs Jittery Zeitgeist
5. CANS.ER.US vs Unknown760
6. Jittery Zeitgeist vs Unknown760

GROUP D
1. Icy vs Forensyx
2. Icy vs The Myth
3. Icy vs Kris burn
4. Forensyx vs The Myth
5. Forensyx vs Kris burn
6. The Myth vs Kris burn.

Send ya verse to me huzzle and inQ and both verses will be posted together and voting follows.
Only check to concur to the challenge,verse are due 32hrs after check and post no more except vote counting.
Unbacked votes will be rendered void.
Voting goes like this-
1.Punch:/10
2.flow:/10
3.multies:/10
4.Word plays&metaphors:/10
5.nameplay&personals:/10
6.humour/enjoyment :/10
7.structure/delivery :/10
total :/70

We all know the rules.
So 3 battles each in a group consisting of 4battlers,groups.eg [ GROUP A,GROUP B,GROUP C...etc]
we'll be having 4 battlers in a group,and each battler will have a round on each <3> other battlers.
Each won battle is proportional to 3points,loss is 0 point and a draw is 1 point each for the contestants.The 1st and 2nd in a group will qualify to the knock out stage,and the 3rd and 4th in each group will be registered for knockout matches in the division 2 text battle tourny.
Bars And Lines-and that is 10bars 20 lines.
The knock out stages in the text battle tourny and the division 2 text battle tourny is just one round,14bars 28 lines.
The final is 16bars 32lines.
Any quarry will be sorted out on the tourny appeal sticky.U go their and make ya quarry and table matters,huzzle i,Meta,Nesta and inQ has the final decision on any battle quarry or matter.
It'll take the admin to correct any of our decisions.
Judges-
1. Huzzle
2. Kryptic
3. Nesta
4. Meta
5. InQ
6. Heskey
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[Dope Antelope]

Checkin'

[InQontroll]

InQ U SHOULD WAIT TILL THEY BOTH SEND THEIR VERSES AND U POST BOTH TOGETHER

[LyrikVishis]

checkin in, been pretty busy the last few days, il try to write my verse tonight and get it to you. sorry for the wait DA, but at least you know im here and I havent forgot.

[Huzzle]

Widowers verse

here's my verse bruh. 54 rhymes in 10 bars. Enjoy that.

Sad, i never heard of you, i been here for a minute
checked the word on you, you mighta mixed a win in it
but your own dude gashed you, i'ma twist my pen in it
and write this fast with your blood, dont die before i finish it
you afraid? No spinnin it, shit's tired, no flow, try to cope, dont mope
i'm the lion on this prarie, no hope for a dope antelope
here's a rope, go choke, piece of l.o.s.s., give ya pallet a rush
waxin your slut mothers, thats the only time a tan tum is valid to us
i'm rabid, you flushed, it's your habit to get crushed
addict for blood gush, so take this tablet and get fucked
i understand why you boast, but thats through, shh, i know, got you speechless
why shouldnt i coast, from ya whole crew, your flow is the weakest
stop acting defeatless, battles are whack, you aint nice
100% meatless, padded your track, but who the fuck is dice?
Your rhymes just dont suffice, worthless mutt, take your maggot friends to weep
i tried to be a good dad, you enticed and fussed, so i'll put your faggot ass to sleep
fate's grim, here to reap, shits weak, i heard you lull on the statics
and takin vibrators out your ass is the only time you pull automatics
so basically, you can take whatever you write and just shove it
cuz hastily, i wrote this in my spare time, and the judges will still love it

dope antelopes verse

yo, waterfights are the only time ya grippin a pistol
yeah you white, but couldn’t be emnem if you flipped your initials (ww=mm)
spit with incisions fixing to kill you, i’m the rhymer that’s dope see
you ain’t wiser lines only bolder when you highlight ya multies
And you cannot fault me, and i’m rawer than you
cuz i hardly see loss like i was ignoring your crew
you weird son, i’m so narrow minded my ears touch
so ask me who’s wack, i point at this pussy like gettin spear fucked
you think you number one? I came to prove you not that
you’d have to go through puberty again to get the spot back
little bitch i’ll throw you a punch, and make you fetch too
i’m double you ww, call me the world wide web dude (www)
without me, you wouldn’t get ya rhymes seen on these internet sites
we use your verses as paper towels, its the only time we feelin’ ya writes
ya got the wackest features, get smashed to pieces cuz raps ya weakness
we know you is bound to flop like being tied to a flaccid penis
get slapped and beat up, my shit pummels, you spit bubbles, it won’t hurt me
i aint jokin, you couldn’t beat dope if you went cold turkey
and i’m so worthy, of the top spot, this joke aint gittin’ through
why you the white widower? when dopes killing you (get it?)

[LyrikVishis]

nice drop, vote it up. i guess i missed a couple of points i shouldve bolded, it was like the third time i had to go through it.

[Dope Antelope]

lets get this shit VOTED sonnn

btw if none of my italic'd bars showed up so if you don't get anything (for the dumbasses) just ask.

[LyrikVishis]

yeah alot of mine didnt show up either, oh well, lets get it voted and move on!

[Dope Antelope]

Yo lets get some votes. No dumbasses.

[CANS.ER.US]

Damn I wanna vote.

[Dope Antelope]

you can vote the tournys cancelled this is just a normal battle now

[CANS.ER.US]

ight... And nobody is voting so I'll step up.



Dope Antelope

1.Punch: 7/10
2.flow: 8/10
3.multies: 8/10
4.Word plays&metaphors: 8/10
5.nameplay&personals: 10/10
6.humour/enjoyment :6 /10
7.structure/delivery : 8/10
total 55:/70

WhiteWidower


1.Punch: 9/10
2.flow: 8/10
3.multies: 9/10
4.Word plays&metaphors:8/10
5.nameplay&personals: 7/10
6.humour/enjoyment :9/10
7.structure/delivery :7/10
total 57 :/70


Favorite Lines:

here's a rope, go choke, piece of l.o.s.s., give ya pallet a rush
waxin your slut mothers, thats the only time a tan tum is valid to us
stop acting defeatless, battles are whack, you aint nice
100% meatless, padded your track, but who the fuck is dice?
fate's grim, here to reap, shits weak, i heard you lull on the statics
and takin vibrators out your ass is the only time you pull automatics

vs

spit with incisions fixing to kill you, i’m the rhymer that’s dope see
you ain’t wiser lines only bolder when you highlight ya multies
without me, you wouldn’t get ya rhymes seen on these internet sites
we use your verses as paper towels, its the only time we feelin’ ya writes


Vote- WhiteWidower I'm an honest voter so I have to call it like I see/read it. In my opinion white edged it out more on the liners that I liked, they had more "sting" to them. Dope bro' you came with nameplay which helped ya personals but I felt they could of been more harsher/funnier, either way it wasn't bad and the flow you had was very decent good, and had the better structure then whites in my opinion. But white still came with multies not saying dope didn't have any but white edge that out bit easily. Well both of you Still came solid and was even matched in some areas, I just felt white's more.

[Abstruse]

Wait, so yall are just doing the torney without it counting for anything, just to do it, so now anyone can vote for anyone? or what the hells going on why was the tourney cancelled i was about to post my shit right now on my battle... the fuck?

[TWK_420]

tourneys over bro, got rained out pack your bags and go home.

[LyrikVishis]

1-0

thanks for the vote. i hope people continue to vote on these battles, because they were good. tourny or not.

[Dope Antelope]

really he had more punches? LOL

Aight disagreee but whatever

[Impressive]

Dope Antelope:

Punches : 6/10
flow : 10/10
multies : 9/10
Nameplay and personals: 8/10
wordplay &metaphors : 7/10
humour and enjoyment : 8/10
structure and delivery : 8/10

56/70

White Widower:

Punches 8/10
flow : 9/10
multies : 8/10
nameplay and personals : 10/10
wordplay and metaphors : 9/10
humour and enjoyment : 8/10
structure and delivery : 7/10

59/70

no real fav lines I liked most of them in this battle hard to highlight just a few ...

VERDICT : Dope Antelope 56/70 White Widower 59/70 ... good battle dope but I got

White Widower by 3

[Dope Antelope]

2-0

Fuck knows how I've got 10/10 in nameplays in the first vote, and lost nameplays in the second. Fuck knows how I'm not winning wordplay cats. Fuck knows how I'm losing on punchlines when he hardly has any. Fuck knows how the multies are being issues since both our verses have multies and they're not important unless it doesn't flow, and both flowed.

Complaining makes me look like a dick and a sore loser, but this sort of shit isn't cool really, it's shit like this that'll make the site better.. I'm sure WhiteWidower agrees with some of what i'm saying, he can read too. I don't think he won.

[LyrikVishis]

Well I thought I won, and you do look like a dick and a sore loser. its still only 2-0 though, one more for the KO.

[phILLy bONE]

2-0

Fuck knows how I've got 10/10 in nameplays in the first vote, and lost nameplays in the second. Fuck knows how I'm not winning wordplay cats. Fuck knows how I'm losing on punchlines when he hardly has any. Fuck knows how the multies are being issues since both our verses have multies and they're not important unless it doesn't flow, and both flowed.

Complaining makes me look like a dick and a sore loser, but this sort of shit isn't cool really, it's shit like this that'll make the site better.. I'm sure WhiteWidower agrees with some of what i'm saying, he can read too. I don't think he won.

Nailed it